Improve Your English
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Improve Your English
Everyone has probably seen this already. But still, it's helpful to be reminded of how important good English is.
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Well, I know. I thought the movie showed how important good German is. I think we are having our legs pulled.
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Re: Improve Your English
While we're on the topic:Bloomfield wrote:....
But still, it's helpful to be reminded of how important good English is.
It is not good English to begin or end a sentence with a "but". Leaving that aside for a minute, there needs to be a comma after your "but". Furthermore, "of how important XXX is" should be replaced by "of the importance of XXX".
In summary your sentence may be better expressed as,
"Nevertheless, it is helpful to be reminded of the importance of good English." Shorter, sweeter and better English.
I trust this reminder is within the spirit of your own reminder.
BTW, I cannot speak German.
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Re: Improve Your English
Thanks! Much appreciated.talasiga wrote:While we're on the topic:Bloomfield wrote:....
But still, it's helpful to be reminded of how important good English is.
It is not good English to begin or end a sentence with a "but". Leaving that aside for a minute, there needs to be a comma after your "but". Furthermore, "of how important XXX is" should be replaced by "of the importance of XXX".
In summary your sentence may be better expressed as,
"Nevertheless, it is helpful to be reminded of the importance of good English." Shorter, sweeter and better English.
I trust this reminder is within the spirit of your own reminder.
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Re: Improve Your English
Tal, despite the obvious spelling errors in your suggested sentence, I would like to point out that the overuse of prepositional phrases can become tiresome. My humble offering:talasiga wrote:In summary your sentence may be better expressed as,
"Nevertheloess, it is helpful to be reminded of the importance of good English."
"Nonetheless, one can always use reminding when it comes to the importance of proper English."
The sentence is simple and unrepetitive, yet interesting and intellectual.
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Re: Improve Your English
Con, there was only ONE error, a typographical one, which was corrected a minute after it was made. Please see my post as edited.Congratulations wrote:Tal, despite the obvious spelling errors in your suggested sentence,...talasiga wrote:In summary your sentence may be better expressed as,
"Nevertheloess, it is helpful to be reminded of the importance of good English."
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Re: Improve Your English
Oooooo. I've been taught to stay away from the use of "one". However I do see your objection to the prepositional phrases.Congratulations wrote:Tal, despite the obvious spelling errors in your suggested sentence, I would like to point out that the overuse of prepositional phrases can become tiresome. My humble offering:talasiga wrote:In summary your sentence may be better expressed as,
"Nevertheloess, it is helpful to be reminded of the importance of good English."
"Nonetheless, one can always use reminding when it comes to the importance of proper English."
The sentence is simple and unrepetitive, yet interesting and intellectual.
Actually the "but" works if the two sentences are put together.
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