My first published piece of short fiction. This piece existed as a narrative poem for awhile and it finally occurred to me it would be better in prose so I rewrote it. I'm gratified to see it accepted:
http://www.poetserv.org/SRR22/srr22_contents.html
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Oh yes. (And thanks for taking note of that little detail).Martin Milner wrote:32-oz is more than a pint!! Can people really drink that much Pepsi?
Nice Story!
Drinks of that size are in fact available in many American establisments.
Referring now to McDonalds:
A small regular soda 16oz ~ 150 calories)
medium 21oz ~ 210 calories)
Super Size 42oz (410 calories),
Or for the biggy, instead of a soda, you go with a 32oz Triple Thick Shake, that would add another 1140 calories!
It's Diabetes in a Cup (TM)
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Dale in the Salt River Review
When I read the topic of this thread I thought you fell into the river or something. Now I see that it's a literary rag that published your prose. 
Congratulations . . . it's probably more fun than falling into the river. 
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Congratulations . . . it's probably more fun than falling into the river. Will O'Ban
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Re: OT: Dale in the Salt River Review
Wow... interesting to say the least! I enjoyed reading that!DaleWisely wrote:My first published piece of short fiction. This piece existed as a narrative poem for awhile and it finally occurred to me it would be better in prose so I rewrote it. I'm gratified to see it accepted:
http://www.poetserv.org/SRR22/srr22_contents.html
Dale
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