.4K Writing Competition: Vote the Winner

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Vote for the Best Piece of .4K Prose

Poll ended at Thu Aug 26, 2004 1:33 pm

cskinner: I Married a Beatle
14
25%
emmline: Love in the Ragweed
2
4%
FJohnSharp: At the Wedding
10
18%
susnfx: The Martians. Relax.
8
14%
Dibe': Old Manheads
2
4%
Ron Kiley: Boys In Summer
1
2%
dubhlinn: The Letter
9
16%
Nanohedron: No Longer the Same
1
2%
Geraghty: She Blinks Sleep
6
11%
scottielvr: Hick-Pop
3
5%
 
Total votes: 56

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Bloomfield wrote:Let me just mention one more thing: There were about 50 entries, not counting entries disqualified by exceeding the word limit. That's amazing and thanks again to everyone. :)
Nobody PMed me to tell me about this competition
They probably thought they were doing me a favour
But I wouldn't have been offended if I had been chosen
Personally I think Bloomfield is really very clever.
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There's some very impressive writing in there. Congratulations to all those chosen for the short list and the honourable mentions. I think the word limit, apart from the necessity for it, works wonderfully to bring out an ability to evoke a whole world with a few well chosen words.
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WHOOOHOOOO
YES
YES
YES
YES
YEEEEEEEEEEHAWWWWWWWW
im the best,
no the worst,
the best of the worst
no just the worst,
happy days are here again,
whooooooohooo
at least i am good at something tho
i am the best damn worst poet ever :-?
i think :boggle: :party:
who gives, i tried, i lost, but im still a winner
gloat suck fawn lick grovel
do i still get a whistle bloom old boy? :twisted:
:D
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Wow, wow. These are some well-written pieces! Congratulations to all the authors.
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Actually, I think my favourite entry is Blackhawk's "The Elevator" which didn't make it into the finals. I hereby accuse Bloomie of incompetence and bias, as he requested.

It could have been worse, Bloo. You could get accused of incontinence and bile. Still might, actually.
An bhfuil aon dearmad i mo Ghaeilge? Abair mé, le do thoil!
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Say it out loud:
I'm incontinent and I'm proud!

:roll:
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Bloomfield wrote:Say it out loud:
I'm incontinent and I'm proud!

:roll:
here you go guntherImage
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avanutria wrote:Actually, I think my favourite entry is Blackhawk's "The Elevator"
Why, thank you, Beth! That was sweet of you to say. :) There were an incredible number of excellent entries. I think there must be some connection in whatever it takes to tell a story and whatever it takes to enjoy playing music.
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The interesting thing is that this shows how different stories connect with different readers. Like different music connects with different listeners.
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Post by Nanohedron »

blackhawk wrote:
avanutria wrote:Actually, I think my favourite entry is Blackhawk's "The Elevator"
Why, thank you, Beth! That was sweet of you to say. :) There were an incredible number of excellent entries. I think there must be some connection in whatever it takes to tell a story and whatever it takes to enjoy playing music.
I liked it, too. That final zinger from out of left field was very tasty. I suspect that you might have a special liking for Haydn.

And I agree, at least so far as playing a piece can be like telling a story. Just "getting through the tune" isn't enough, I think, if you want to engage your audience better.
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Thank you, Nano. :)
Nothing is so firmly believed as that which is least known--Montaigne

We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark. The real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light
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Post by Bloomfield »

Just to let everybody know that I made this a seven-day poll. After the poll closes, the winner will have, um, won.

So if you haven't yet, please vote before Thursday.

Thanks :)
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Hey, I'm voting as often as I can. :wink:
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Post by Bloomfield »

And the Winner is:

cskinner: I married a Beatle

2nd place:

FJohnSharp: The Wedding

3rd place:

Dubhinn: The Letter

Runner-Up:

susnfx: The Martians. Relax.

Congratulations!

The winner has her choice of the Phil Coulter CD, a lollycross CD, having her Susato tweaked by Bloomfield (and thereby magically transformed into a whistle), or Bloomfield-tweaked Generation or Feadog.

FJohnsharp gets to choose among what cskinner doesn't want. Dubhlinn will get a thread named after him. And everybody's a winner.

Thanks again to all participats. :)
/Bloomfield
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Congrats to all of you!! :)
Nothing is so firmly believed as that which is least known--Montaigne

We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark. The real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light
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