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 Post subject: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2015 6:29 pm 
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Off to the dentist
For my annual checkup
This will not be fun

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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2015 1:15 am 
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my teeth strong but brown
surviving without dentists
the tombstones persist

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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
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Leaves turning color
Loosening, falling to earth
Just like my damned teeth

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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2015 1:08 pm 
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trees in the forest
shout with gold through green to red
still my teeth persist

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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 3:13 pm 
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dig up this thread
for it's dead like Berenice
with the perfect teeth


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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2017 5:41 am 
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spittle escaping
down my chin, hook scratching nerves
what was I thinking


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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2017 3:33 pm 
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Dental drill, I cannot feel
because of anesthesia,
My tooth is ill, I feel no chill,
I dream about amnesia.

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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2017 1:50 am 
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l.brook wrote:
Dental drill, I cannot feel
because of anesthesia,
My tooth is ill, I feel no chill,
I dream about amnesia.

Too many words fill
this non haiku edifice
crowded like my teeth

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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2017 10:18 pm 
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My caps are loose
no money for the visit
I will eat with care

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 Post subject: Re: Dental Haiku
PostPosted: Sun Aug 13, 2017 1:21 am 
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UncleChuck wrote:
My caps are loose
no money for the visit
I will eat with care

Your first line is sparse
Its syllables' paucity
Like chalk on blackboard

My teeth revolting
With each deliberation
Patterns too square so

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