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Dental Haiku

Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2015 6:29 pm
by Coffee
Off to the dentist
For my annual checkup
This will not be fun

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2015 1:15 am
by benhall.1
my teeth strong but brown
surviving without dentists
the tombstones persist

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2015 12:53 pm
by Nanohedron
Leaves turning color
Loosening, falling to earth
Just like my damned teeth

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2015 1:08 pm
by benhall.1
trees in the forest
shout with gold through green to red
still my teeth persist

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 3:13 pm
by Anastasia
dig up this thread
for it's dead like Berenice
with the perfect teeth

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2017 5:41 am
by Marjorie
spittle escaping
down my chin, hook scratching nerves
what was I thinking

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2017 3:33 pm
by l.brook
Dental drill, I cannot feel
because of anesthesia,
My tooth is ill, I feel no chill,
I dream about amnesia.

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2017 1:50 am
by benhall.1
l.brook wrote:Dental drill, I cannot feel
because of anesthesia,
My tooth is ill, I feel no chill,
I dream about amnesia.
Too many words fill
this non haiku edifice
crowded like my teeth

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2017 10:18 pm
by UncleChuck
My caps are loose
no money for the visit
I will eat with care

Re: Dental Haiku

Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2017 1:21 am
by benhall.1
UncleChuck wrote:My caps are loose
no money for the visit
I will eat with care
Your first line is sparse
Its syllables' paucity
Like chalk on blackboard

My teeth revolting
With each deliberation
Patterns too square so

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