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Re: Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2016 4:30 pm
by benhall.1
there is no snow here
heavy frost clothes the garden
hoar girt hedges creak

Re: Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2016 12:36 am
by Coffee
Foolishly I run
Marathon in Korea
-tub's too small to soak.

Re: Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2016 12:40 pm
by Nanohedron
Still cold, still snowing,
Still wearing my overcoat.
Whither April, Lord?

Re: Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2016 7:01 am
by Dale

Re: Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Mon Jul 03, 2017 6:31 am
by walrii
Sun rising thru mist
Hot e'en now in humid air
There's fruitcake tonight!



(My family makes fruitcakes every Christmas. My brother started a tradition some years back of freezing a few pieces then opening them on July 4th as a reminder of colder days and Christmas. The tradition is the flip side of opening that bottle of summer wine on a cold January night. If you detest fruitcake, that's fine. You can still appreciate the thought while leaving more fruitcake for me!)

Re: Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2017 3:26 am
by Innocent Bystander
Shall I take a coat?
Overheat? Cloudy, but hot...
Dogs get wet. No sweat!



Explanation: It's often overcast in Oldham on the wet side of the Pennines. It might rain, it might not. It can be hot, too. I walk the dogs twice a day. They often end up wet even when it doesn't rain. Rivers, ditches, you name it.

Re: Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:11 am
by benhall.1
Innocent Bystander wrote:Shall I take a coat?
Overheat? Cloudy, but hot...
Dogs get wet. No sweat!



Explanation: It's often overcast in Oldham on the wet side of the Pennines. It might rain, it might not. It can be hot, too. I walk the dogs twice a day. They often end up wet even when it doesn't rain. Rivers, ditches, you name it.
I think your haiku explained it all wonderfully. And with fewer words. :)

Re: Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2017 10:11 am
by Nanohedron
Steamy air shimmers;
Even the birds sound listless.
A storm is coming